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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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in the middle ages the order of succession of
the planetary spheres had far reaching implications starting from earth which
was their center the succession was as follows moon mercury Venus sun mars Jupiter
Saturn implicit in that order were two fundamental consequences the hours of
the day and the sequence of days of the week there were hours from midnight to
midnight which made up what was called the day natural and these were the hours
of the clock however there were also hours from sunrise to sunset and those
were termed the hours of the planets they were termed unequal for an obvious
reason the period between sunrise and sunset change in length with the suns
annual coarse only twice in the year will the hours of the clocks and the hours
of the planets be identical Geoffrey Chaucer a medieval writer was quoted as
saying each constellation has its own qualities and each planet has its own
nature he believed mars was hot and dry Venus was hot and moist and so on other
writers believed that the twelve constellations of the zodiac were accidental
groupings astrological clusters that had great impact on the human world in
worn and faded parchments the strange science of the middle ages still survives
in all its outdated glory we would do well to remember just how much we’ve
learned and how much society’s scientific advancement have improved from
century to century.
  

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You need to do a lot more work before this "paragraph" is ready for editing.

1. You need some sentences. Those are the things that start with a capital letter and end with a period.

2. You need some commas in the appropriate places.

3. You may need to break it up into two or more paragraphs, it's impossible to tell in its current state.

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