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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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can you please edit my welcome speech?
My hearty greetings to one and all gathered here... It’s indeed a great pleasure for me to welcome you all for this wonderful occasion. On Behalf of the teachers and students of Panchayat Union school, I extend a very warm welcome to all. First of all, I would like to welcome SMC leader, Mrs. Heera, and its members for today’s event. I cordially welcome the village educational committee leader Mr. Mani and the members of VEC for their arrival. I welcome the panchayat president Mr. Gajapathy for today’s function. I heartily welcome the teachers from various schools, who gave their gracious presence for today’s function. I would also like to welcome the parents and relatives for this celebration. Last but not least, I welcome all my student friends for this grand gala. Once again I welcome you all. Thank you. Have a nice day.
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It is too long and terribly repetitive. Your audience will be asleep before you finish. On this wonderful occasion and on behalf of the teachers and students of Panchayat Union School, I would like to welcome SMC leader Mrs.
- It is too long and terribly repetitive.
- Your audience will be asleep before you finish.
- On this wonderful occasion and on behalf of the teachers and students of Panchayat Union School, I would like to welcome SMC leader Mrs.
- Heera and the SMC members, the village educational committee leader Mr.
- Mani and the members of VEC, Panchayat president Mr.
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It is too long and terribly repetitive. Your audience will be asleep before you finish.
On this wonderful occasion and on behalf of the teachers and students of Panchayat Union School, I would like to welcome SMC leader Mrs. Heera and the SMC members, the village educational committee leader Mr. Mani and the members of VEC, Panchayat president Mr. Gajapathy, the teachers from various s
On this wonderful occasion and on behalf of the teachers and students of Panchayat Union School, I would like to welcome SMC leader Mrs. Heera and the SMC members, the village educational committee leader Mr. Mani and the members of VEC, Panchayat president Mr. Gajapathy, the teachers from various s
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