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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Can you please correct the sentences?

Presston Corp is using our P2005 tool and frequently buying the spare parts from us. But they are not buying the Rivets from us due to pricing. I asked them to send the list of Rivets they buy from other suppliers for us to check the feasibility of matching their price expectation.
  

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Nothing particularly wrong with this wording. I might make a couple of changes to be absolutely clear. Presston Corp is using our P2005 tool and frequently buys spare parts from us.

  • Nothing particularly wrong with this wording.
  • I might make a couple of changes to be absolutely clear.
  • Presston Corp is using our P2005 tool and frequently buys spare parts from us.
  • But they are not buying the rivets from us due to pricing.
  • I asked them to send us a list of the rivets they buy from other suppliers so that we can check the feasibility of matching their prices.
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Nothing particularly wrong with this wording. I might make a couple of changes to be absolutely clear.

Presston Corp is using our P2005 tool and frequently buys spare parts from us. But they are not buying the rivets from us due to pricing. I asked them to send us a list of the rivets they buy from other suppliers so that we can check the feasibility of matching their prices.

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