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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to get myself introduced to the new purchasing team members of Rio Mechanics Limited.
Outcome: I introduced myself to Mr. John who has been appointed as head of purchasing department in place of Mr. Robert who left the company recently. I told him that we used to sell our product, article number 256. But we haven't received any purchase orders in this year so for. Mr. John said that the order wouldn't have placed on us because they(Rio Mechanics) have no new projects. They expect a new project in this month wherein our product is needed. As soon as he gets a confirmation of new project, he will contact me.
Outcome: I introduced myself to Mr. John who has been appointed as head of purchasing department in place of Mr. Robert who left the company recently. I told him that we used to sell our product, article number 256. But we haven't received any purchase orders in this year so for. Mr. John said that the order wouldn't have placed on us because they(Rio Mechanics) have no new projects. They expect a new project in this month wherein our product is needed. As soon as he gets a confirmation of new project, he will contact me.
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to introduce myself to the new purchasing team members of Rio Mechanics Limited. Outcome: I introduced myself to Mr. [surname], who has been appointed head of the purchasing department in place of Mr.
- Topic: The purpose of the visit was to introduce myself to the new purchasing team members of Rio Mechanics Limited.
- Outcome: I introduced myself to Mr.
- [surname], who has been appointed head of the purchasing department in place of Mr.
- [surname], who left the company recently.
- 256, but we haven't received any purchase orders this year so far.
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to introduce myself to the new purchasing team members of Rio Mechanics Limited.
Outcome: I introduced myself to Mr. [surname], who has been appointed head of the purchasing department in place of Mr. [surname], who left the company recently. I told him that we used to sell them our product no.256, but we haven't received any purchase orders t
Outcome: I introduced myself to Mr. [surname], who has been appointed head of the purchasing department in place of Mr. [surname], who left the company recently. I told him that we used to sell them our product no.256, but we haven't received any purchase orders t
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