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Achucoul Posted 11 years ago
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to get clarified on the enquiries we received a week ago as information was not clear.
Outcome: discussion 1: I met the plant manager Mr. Joseph and he gave me further information on material, dimensions, etc. He is also going to share the drawings of the items of which he couldn't give the information. I requested him to provide the samples of the items for our analysis, but he was not supposed to give since their company policy does not allow. discussion 2: I asked about the status of our tool quotation which we have submitted a month ago. He asked me to send our service engineer to check the condition of tools which he bought 4 years ago which are not in working condition. Our service engineer has to inform what the exact problem in those tools is. If the tools can work by changing the spare parts, they will spend money and keep using those tools.
Further plan: As soon as we get the drawings, we have to choose equivalent items in our product range and submit our best offer. Our service person has to visit and identity the issue in our tools and give his feedback.
Outcome: discussion 1: I met the plant manager Mr. Joseph and he gave me further information on material, dimensions, etc. He is also going to share the drawings of the items of which he couldn't give the information. I requested him to provide the samples of the items for our analysis, but he was not supposed to give since their company policy does not allow. discussion 2: I asked about the status of our tool quotation which we have submitted a month ago. He asked me to send our service engineer to check the condition of tools which he bought 4 years ago which are not in working condition. Our service engineer has to inform what the exact problem in those tools is. If the tools can work by changing the spare parts, they will spend money and keep using those tools.
Further plan: As soon as we get the drawings, we have to choose equivalent items in our product range and submit our best offer. Our service person has to visit and identity the issue in our tools and give his feedback.
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to get ( clarified on) clarification of the enquiries we received a week ago as information was not clear. Outcome: D iscussion 1: I met the plant manager, Mr. Joseph, and he gave me further information on material, dimensions, etc.
- Topic: The purpose of the visit was to get ( clarified on) clarification of the enquiries we received a week ago as information was not clear.
- Outcome: D iscussion 1: I met the plant manager, Mr.
- Joseph, and he gave me further information on material, dimensions, etc.
- He is also going to share the drawings of the items ( of ) for which he couldn't give the information.
- I requested ( him to ) he provide the samples of the items for our analysis, but he was ( not supposed ) unable to ( to give ) since their company policy does not allow it .
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to get (clarified on) clarification of the enquiries we received a week ago as information was not clear.
Outcome:
Discussion 1: I met the plant manager, Mr. Joseph, and he gave me further information on material, dimensions, etc. He is also going to share the drawings of the items (of) for
Outcome:
Discussion 1: I met the plant manager, Mr. Joseph, and he gave me further information on material, dimensions, etc. He is also going to share the drawings of the items (of) for
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