Can you please correct or suggest any changes to my drafted sponsor letter?

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00I have drafted a letter regarding my wife visa request from the visa office.02br
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00Will you be able to go through and correct it and suggest me any new formats if avalable?02br
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00Thanks and regards,02br
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00Rosh02br
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00 Address02br
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00The Visa Officer02br
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00Dear Sir/Madam,02br
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01b01u00Re: Sponsorship for my wife to live with me in UK00 02u02b02br
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00I as the husband of Mrs.00 00H (My wife’s name) (DOB, 02br
00Passport No.) would like to sponsor her to live with me in UK02br
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00I am X (my name), currently working in UK at Y(company name) as an T(job) on Permanent basis since April 2004.00 02br
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00 00I own a two bedroom flat and doing a permanent job in UK so I am sure I’ll be able to look after my wife.02br
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00I am enclosing following evidence documents to support my case.02br
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00I will be grateful if you could grant Visa to my to accompany me to come and live with me in UK.I am planning to leave in 1 weeks time to UK and I would be delighted if I can accompany my wife with me. I would be grateful if you could grant her visa to come with me to UK.02br
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00Thank you in advance.02br
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00If you require further information please contact me.02br
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00Thanking you02br
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01b00Yours Faithfully02b02br
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00My Name0-