Can you please correct my grammar? Thank you so much!

1. My manager tole my colleague and I that we had to be more conscience of our proofreading because our reports had to many errors.
2. Readers want to scan messages quic therefore we should use every day language and be concise.
3. Even in europe and canada company executives are disapointed by messages that are to long an to difficult to read.
4. One managers report contained so many redudancys that it's main principals requesting State and Federal funding was lost.
5. You're writing will sound more fresher, if you eliminate trite business phases such as "pursuant to you're request.
6. All 3 of our companys recruiters: Angelica Santos, Kirk Adams, And David toms - critisized there poorly-written procedures.
7. To help recievers anticipate and comprehend ideas quick 2 special writing thecniques is helpful, parallalism which involves balanced writing and bulleting which make important points more visible.
8. When I proof read a important document I all ways work with a buddy, and read from a printed copy.
9. Read a message once for word meanings, read it again for grammer and mechanics.
10. Its all most impossible to improve one communication sills alone, therefore every one should take advatage of this educational oppertunity.