Can you please corect my motivation letter

To Whom It May Concern:



From your university website, I learn about this Bachelor’s of General Engineering, and I am very interested in it. I’ve always had dreams of finishing my education. Program like the one offered by will allow me to do it. The online approach is right for me because it will allow me to maintain my full-time job, spend time with my family, while I can study, take exams and work on my project from my home. The xxxxxxx program is just right for me.



This program will give me the opportunity to link my past education and experiences with new studies in the Engineering field. To achieve my future goals I need a good education and this Bachelor program is the right one in order to realize my aspirations. With all my experiences and your Education program I will be able to be more successful on my current job, witch will probably lead me to promotions and better life for me and my family.



To support my motivation, I would like to introduce myself. I am a determinate person who always fights hard to achieve my goals. I am independent, intuitive, and calm under pressure and have good interpersonal skills. I am able to adapt to a constantly changing work and study environment and to maintain a good relationship with individuals also from different cultures and backgrounds. Also beside English I speak two more languages, Bosnian and German. My teachers know me as a courteous, dutiful and resourceful student and my co-workers know me as a light-hearted friend and an enthusiasm co-worker.