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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing

Can you please check this text

Hello,
I need you to check this text and correct or improve the text if necessary. Thanks for helpers:

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Hi I might write ... If the product we offer has helped you and you want to give a donation, we would welcome that. We look forward to your money donation but, if that's not possible, we will be glad if you contribute by sharing this site with others that you think might be interested in the product.

  • Hi I might write ...
  • If the product we offer has helped you and you want to give a donation, we would welcome that.
  • We look forward to your money donation but, if that's not possible, we will be glad if you contribute by sharing this site with others that you think might be interested in the product.
  • Your donation will help us a lot with the development of the product, our future products and keeping our products free without advertising.
  • Without your money donation, we may not be able to maintain the quality of the product and we might have to use advertisements or charge for the use of the product.
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Hi

I might write ...

If the product we offer has helped you and you want to give a donation, we would welcome that.

We look forward to your money donation but, if that's not possible, we will be glad if you contribute by sharing this site with others that you think might be interested in the product.

Your donation will help us a lot with the development of the p
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i am working in an NGO since 2 years in different positions my other colleagues got salary increment except me. please help me to draft a request letter to my hr section for increment
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Hi Anon

I'm afraid you're not allowed to post email details here, so English Forums has removed your item

If you cut and paste your draft text - and if it's not too long - I'll have a look

Dave
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Thank you very much!

About the forum, I have a problem every time after I open thread.
Because I use Anonymous, after I send thread, I do not get link for the thread because the thread still waiting for approval.

As a result, I do not know what my is the link of the thread even after the thread approved
So I have to search for my own thread with Google

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Yes, there is a very simple solution! Simply register with a user name, and make your posts using it. When you logon, you will see notification that someone has responded to your post, and you'll be able to access it with a simple click.

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