Can you please check this sentence?
Dear expert friend,
I request to check the following sentence and let me know whether it is correct or not. If not, what may be the correct sentence?
''We believe in giving value to our customers, at the best possible price and our desire to make beautiful and useful decors available forms the core of our existence as a business.''
Thanks in advance
Abu
Top answer
monsur We believe in giving value to our customers [no comma] at the best possible price , [comma] and our desire to make beautiful and useful decors available forms the core of our existence as a business. Correct as shown. However, it's a little wordier than necessary.
- monsur We believe in giving value to our customers [no comma] at the best possible price , [comma] and our desire to make beautiful and useful decors available forms the core of our existence as a business.
- Correct as shown.
- However, it's a little wordier than necessary.
- You might consider writing the second clause as and our desire to make beautiful interiors forms the core of our business.
- The plural 'decors' is a bit unusual.
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monsurWe believe in giving value to our customers [no comma] at the best possible price, [comma] and our desire to make beautiful and useful decors available forms the core of our existence as a business.
Correct as shown. However, it's
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