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Magnus Sciencefiction Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Can you please check this formal e-mail for style errors?

Respected Sir,
I have read the entire 'Malgudi Days' collection of short-stories as instructed. Therein I have not found any mention of 'The Financial Expert.' So, I searched for it on the internet. However, I found out that 'The Financial Expert' is a separate novel, and not a short-story. In that case, my question is, are we still supposed to prepare our presentation on 'The Financial Expert?'

Thank You.
Regards,
XYZ.
  

Top answer

To use "Sir" is to be formal, so I would use "Dear" with it and follow it with a colon. Therein I have not found any mention of 'The Financial Expert,' so I searched for it on the internet. You wrote a nice email.

— Englishmaven

  • To use "Sir" is to be formal, so I would use "Dear" with it and follow it with a colon.
  • Therein I have not found any mention of 'The Financial Expert,' so I searched for it on the internet.
  • You wrote a nice email.
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To use "Sir" is to be formal, so I would use "Dear" with it and follow it with a colon.

Therein I have not found any mention of 'The Financial Expert,' so I searched for it on the internet.

You wrote a nice email.
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