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This line graph represents the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in the European country for the given year (1979-2004) and this includes fish, lamb, beef and chicken respectively.

It can clearly be seen in the diagram that beef has the highest consumption from the beginning of the given year which account for 210 grams per person per week while chicken was second in terms of consumption which is 150 grams per week each person. It is also noticeable that beef and chicken has opposite trend which shows that at the end of the given year chicken become the most popular meat in 2004.

When it comes to fish and lamb, both of them show same trend.from 1979 to 2004 both of them declined in number. Lamb in 1979 was almost same as beef but totally went down in consistent flow until it drops to almost 80 grams per person each week. Though fish has the lowest consumption ever since, it didn’t even rise at all in the given year and in fact it was lowest food choice for the population in European country.

To summarize, beef and chicken is still the most popular meet in the country from the beginning of the given year up to the end, while fish and chicken stay as the less preferred meet at the end of the given year.

  

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