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Osmancataloluk Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can you please check my sentence, please,regards
FOE
But soon, another danger on the horizon of their friendship specified. And this time it would seem that this foe was beyond any of them. It was Vahe who was the husband of Maria herself and would not stand their friendship.
But soon, another danger on the horizon of their friendship specified. And this time it would seem that this foe was beyond any of them. It was Vahe who was the husband of Maria herself and would not stand their friendship.
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I would look for a better word than "specified" for the sentence. "
- I would look for a better word than "specified" for the sentence.
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I would look for a better word than "specified" for the sentence. You need commas in the last sentence, and you might consider "tolerate" rather than "stand."
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Thanks dear mentor,
how would this changes sound then?
But soon, another danger on the horizon of their friendship appeared. And this time it would seem that this foe was beyond any of them. It was, Vahe, who was the husband of Maria herself and would not stand their friendship.
regards
osman
how would this changes sound then?
But soon, another danger on the horizon of their friendship appeared. And this time it would seem that this foe was beyond any of them. It was, Vahe, who was the husband of Maria herself and would not stand their friendship.
regards
osman
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