Can you please check my letter -Accepting a bursary offer
Dear ...
We are writing this in response to the .....offer letter we have received on the 10th of February.
We are thrilled our daughter ....was awarded % bursary of the annual day fee and would be absolutely delighted for her to be part of such a prestigious school.
This letter should be a formal acceptance of the award.
As you would understand, the amount we will be liable for after the bursary applied (...) will put a pressure on our family budget and we want to make sure we are aware of all the “other extras” we need to be ready to pay on top of that amount (food, classes, books, trips…).That would enable us to carefully plan our finances In the future .
Thank you for this amazing opportunity and look forward to hearing from you regarding next steps.
Top answer
This is a rather well written letter. I made some changes for you. Good luck and congratulation on your daughter's bursary.
- This is a rather well written letter.
- I made some changes for you.
- Good luck and congratulation on your daughter's bursary.
- offer letter we received on the 10 th of February.
- was awarded % bursary for the annual day fee and would be absolutely delighted for her to be part of such a prestigious school.
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This is a rather well written letter. I made some changes for you. Good luck and congratulation on your daughter's bursary.
We are writing this in response to the .....offer letter we received on the 10th of February.
We are thrilled our daughter ....was awarded % bursary for the annual day fee and would be absolutely delighted for her to be part of such a prestigio
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