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Mateusz Basiak Posted 9 years ago
Letter Writing
Can you please check my essey?
I`m still learning and I`m trying to write as much as possible. Unfortunately, I do not have a person to check it for me. Can you please help me? Thanks in advance.
topic:
"Discuss the importance of holidays and celebrations in the life of a single person as well as that of the community."
Christmas are unique time, when we finally have a time for meetings with our family. Most of the people celebrate their holidays at home with relatives and friends. However, nowadays it is popular to spend Christmas abroad, where you can simply relax and have a rest from the rush, which is surrounding us. It is believed that this kind of celebration is not related to any values, because what is the most important during that time – family, is set aside. When it comes to holidays, we are rather traditionalist. Lack of Christmas Tree, Christmas Eve Supper and sharing wafer seems to be unimaginable. Nevertheless, religious values are no longer important, especially among young people. It all became some kind of wont and without it would be just “awkward”. But, it is still time of being kind to each other- we share wishes and gifts, we are closer to our family, we do not care about our work and our only problem is thinking about losing weight after New Year. Taking everything into consideration, this unique but short holidays are setting the tone of goodness and kindness in every heart. Our time is organised by them, because of shopping and preparations, but it would be so boring without them, would not it?
topic:
"Discuss the importance of holidays and celebrations in the life of a single person as well as that of the community."
Christmas are unique time, when we finally have a time for meetings with our family. Most of the people celebrate their holidays at home with relatives and friends. However, nowadays it is popular to spend Christmas abroad, where you can simply relax and have a rest from the rush, which is surrounding us. It is believed that this kind of celebration is not related to any values, because what is the most important during that time – family, is set aside. When it comes to holidays, we are rather traditionalist. Lack of Christmas Tree, Christmas Eve Supper and sharing wafer seems to be unimaginable. Nevertheless, religious values are no longer important, especially among young people. It all became some kind of wont and without it would be just “awkward”. But, it is still time of being kind to each other- we share wishes and gifts, we are closer to our family, we do not care about our work and our only problem is thinking about losing weight after New Year. Taking everything into consideration, this unique but short holidays are setting the tone of goodness and kindness in every heart. Our time is organised by them, because of shopping and preparations, but it would be so boring without them, would not it?
Top answer
For an essay, you need to organize your text into paragraphs. Have you learned about paragraphs yet?
- For an essay, you need to organize your text into paragraphs.
- Have you learned about paragraphs yet?
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For an essay, you need to organize your text into paragraphs.
Have you learned about paragraphs yet?
Have you learned about paragraphs yet?
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It is divided into paragraphs, but when I wrote a post I simply pressed ctrl+v and post, I didn`t notice the lack of it. + there is no "edit post" option, and I didn`t want to delete the thread. sorry. I hope that you understand
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Christmas is a are unique time, when we finally have a time to spend for meetings with our family. Most of the people celebrate their holidays at home with relatives and friends. However, nowadays it is popular to spend Christmas abroad, where you can simply relax and have a rest from the rush, which is surrounding us. It is believed tha
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