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Ghai_prince13 Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can you please check my essay Plz PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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01 b 00 11.1. You have met the neighbor who has entered the university: 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 1) Tell to it about the plans for the future; 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 2) ask on its future specialty; 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 3) Prove the choice 02 b 02 br
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00 Hi anil .how are you doing there. It’s been ages since I’ve seen you and quite a lot has happened I ‘m so glad to see you. Where have you been all the time? 00 00 I heard that you had left our school and entered Law College. Hey, is that true? Is it interesting to be a law student? I hope you are enjoying your college life and you must have also made many friends congratulation. My best wishes are always with you. 02 br
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00 As for me, this my last year. It is a very important time for me as now I have make a correct decision on what career I have to chose and I ‘have to be in future. Some of my classmate has chosen specific subjects and want to get specialized education at proper technical schools 02 br
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00 I’d always been interested in to be a doctor as my future plan is work in England but I am not good enough in English so I will have to work hard so I’ve decided to enter the English language department. I’ll also be giving the FCE and TOFEL examination from the Cambridge. So I can easily study in England in London to complete my course of hospital management and work there. 02 br
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00 Well, it was really lovely to see you. I’m glad your dream has true. All the best for your future anil. Take care. Bye. 0-
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01 b 00 11.1. You have met the neighbor who has entered the university: 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 1) Tell to it about the plans for the future; 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 2) ask on its future specialty; 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 3) Prove the choice 02 b 02 br
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00 Hi anil .how are you doing there. It’s been ages since I’ve seen you and quite a lot has happened I ‘m so glad to see you. Where have you been all the time? 00 00 I heard that you had left our school and entered Law College. Hey, is that true? Is it interesting to be a law student? I hope you are enjoying your college life and you must have also made many friends congratulation. My best wishes are always with you. 02 br
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00 As for me, this my last year. It is a very important time for me as now I have make a correct decision on what career I have to chose and I ‘have to be in future. Some of my classmate has chosen specific subjects and want to get specialized education at proper technical schools 02 br
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00 I’d always been interested in to be a doctor as my future plan is work in England but I am not good enough in English so I will have to work hard so I’ve decided to enter the English language department. I’ll also be giving the FCE and TOFEL examination from the Cambridge. So I can easily study in England in London to complete my course of hospital management and work there. 02 br
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00 Well, it was really lovely to see you. I’m glad your dream has true. All the best for your future anil. Take care. Bye. 0-
Top answer
0 I do hope that your teacher didn't give you that question as it gives me serious doubts about their English ability! 02 br 02 br 00 You have a nice natural and fluent writing style. You just need to be a little more careful with your verb tenses sometimes and plan your sentence ends/starts more carefully.
- 0 I do hope that your teacher didn't give you that question as it gives me serious doubts about their English ability!
- 02 br 02 br 00 You have a nice natural and fluent writing style.
- You just need to be a little more careful with your verb tenses sometimes and plan your sentence ends/starts more carefully.
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0 I do hope that your teacher didn't give you that question as it gives me serious doubts about their English ability! You can't refer to people as 'it' for a start, and there are lots of other errors. 02 br
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00 You have a nice natural and fluent writing style. You just need to be a little more careful with your verb tenses sometimes and plan your sentence ends/starts more ca
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00 You have a nice natural and fluent writing style. You just need to be a little more careful with your verb tenses sometimes and plan your sentence ends/starts more ca
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