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Shahhar Posted 15 years ago
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Describe a technology innovation that will impact physical therapy services in 10 years. What is it and how will it help patients or the profession?
Now days, a large amount of people have physical problems after a severe auto accidents, health condition such as obesity or any muscular problems that require to use workout machine or therapeutic machine for the faster recovery. The only technology innovation that will impact physical therapy services in 10 years when a machine can be used in a way to exercise and rehabilitees for all ages and help patients to improve in all areas such as balance, weight management, functional cardio-efficiently, speed, quickness, and coordination. A machine should have latest technology and new techniques which helps patient to get recover faster and do surgery faster , that way patients have to spend less time in hospitals. The exercise machine should be more exciting and interesting that all the patients would like to use it which will also help them to get quick healing.
In next ten years, I believe that computer related therapeutic machines will be the latest technological innovation to improve the patient’s health condition and quality of life of individuals in society. This machine impacts will show dramatic improvement in physical therapy services in 10 years. This machine will be very advantageous and beneficial to all ages of patients. In addition, this computer analysis machine will really helpful for patients and for physical therapy profession, as it will show performance level on screen and save progress as patients use them.
give me ideas or let me know if it makes sense or not
Now days, a large amount of people have physical problems after a severe auto accidents, health condition such as obesity or any muscular problems that require to use workout machine or therapeutic machine for the faster recovery. The only technology innovation that will impact physical therapy services in 10 years when a machine can be used in a way to exercise and rehabilitees for all ages and help patients to improve in all areas such as balance, weight management, functional cardio-efficiently, speed, quickness, and coordination. A machine should have latest technology and new techniques which helps patient to get recover faster and do surgery faster , that way patients have to spend less time in hospitals. The exercise machine should be more exciting and interesting that all the patients would like to use it which will also help them to get quick healing.
In next ten years, I believe that computer related therapeutic machines will be the latest technological innovation to improve the patient’s health condition and quality of life of individuals in society. This machine impacts will show dramatic improvement in physical therapy services in 10 years. This machine will be very advantageous and beneficial to all ages of patients. In addition, this computer analysis machine will really helpful for patients and for physical therapy profession, as it will show performance level on screen and save progress as patients use them.
give me ideas or let me know if it makes sense or not
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Hello shahhar; I've highlighted some places that need attention and made some changes in boldface. You need to pay attention to subject-verb agreement, sentence structure, the use of singular or plural nouns, and determiners (a, the). If you have any questions, please ask.
- Hello shahhar; I've highlighted some places that need attention and made some changes in boldface.
- You need to pay attention to subject-verb agreement, sentence structure, the use of singular or plural nouns, and determiners (a, the).
- If you have any questions, please ask.
- Now days , a large amount (number) of people have physical problems after a severe auto accidents , health condition such as obesity or any muscular problems that require to use workout machine or therapeutic machine for a faster recovery.
- ) The only technology innovation that will impact physical therapy services in 10 years (missing verb) when a machine can be used in a way to exercise and rehabilitees for all ages and help patients to improve in all areas such as balance, weight management, functional cardio-efficiently , speed, quickness, and coordination.
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Hello shahhar; I've highlighted some places that need attention and made some changes in boldface. You need to pay attention to subject-verb agreement, sentence structure, the use of singular or plural nouns, and determiners (a, the). If you have any questions, please ask.
Now days, a large amount
Now days, a large amount
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