Can you please check if my grammar is correct , thanks!
1. Most of us are lazy and/or value our time. Can I say like this?
2. Multi-user portals are simply unable to achieve that close interaction between a web site owner and web site visitors, whereas small web sites are. I am not sure about the "whereas" construction here.
3. Negotiating skills, which you, as a web site owner, might gain during this interaction, will not only help you prove yourself as a person whom people can trust, but also will help you succeed in rental. I would like to know if I can use "will not only help" and "but also will help" here and if I use them correctly. Thank you!
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Hi, 1. Most of us are lazy and/or value our time. Can I say like this?
— Clive
Hi, 1.
Most of us are lazy and/or value our time.
Can I say like this?
No-one wants to be told they are lazy.
2.
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1. Most of us are lazy and/or value our time. Can I say like this? Just say 'We all value our time'.No-one wants to be told they are lazy.
2. Multi-user portals are simply unable to achieve that close interaction between a web site owner and web site visitors, whereas small web sites are. I am not sure about the "whereas" construction here. 'Whe