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Dado Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you please check

Hello, I'm new here and i'm learning english for a long time. But I need help, it is very important to me. Can you please check is this correct? Thanks

When the time comes to give money to you and to LP. I will say exactly date and put it on website. I will put on every audio and pictures proof that I give money to you and LP.


1. Can I make banner for my account?

No you can’t. Everyone have the same banner. If I see you use other banner you will be banned.

You CAN’T change anything about banners.



2.Where I can put banners and links?

Everywhere you want and where is allowed. You musn’t break any Rules or Terms Of Use of any site. if I become informed of admins your broke it, I will ban you.


Mail

I accept only Yahoo! Mail and G-Mail. I don't accept other mail addresses. If you try to register with any other mail I will delete your account and you won’t receive award. If you win and your mail isn’t Yahoo! Mail or G-mail you won’t receive award. You MUST give you real mail address so you can confirm it.

Private Information

You don’t need to give me your private information except your name and surname. If you win I will contact you and we will discuss the details.



Points

I WON’T give points to anyone. Every user gets 10 points when they register themselves. I’m checking points all the time.

Winner

Winner is person who collects the most points and that person will receive money. Before I give money I will check all points. ONLY the winner gets money.

Account

You MUSTN’T have 2 or more accounts. I have right to do with your account whatever I want (deletes it, change it or suspend it.).

If you try to trick me I will delete your account immediately and ban your IP address.
Banner

You CAN put banners on forum (signature), on your website and anywhere else until you don’t break this rules or rules on page where you put banner.

You MUST use default banners, you MUSTN’T use your banners or change my banners.
When I found out you broke rules I will delete your account.
Don’t forget I can see from where you get clicks. If you try to trick me in any way I will delete your account

Owners of websites can tell me if you break the rules.

Site

Everything on this site is free. You don’t need to pay for anything.

Money

Maybe you want to know how I will collect money. Well… Look around and ask yourself what you see on this site. This website will be online as long as I want. It’s my decision how much money I will collect.

User’s rules:

You won’t:
  1. Break rules
  2. Change banners in any way (their look and size)
  3. Have 2 or more accounts
  4. Cheat in any way (to get points…)
For all questions you can ask on FORUM or CONTACT ME.

Rules can be changed in anytime.

  

Top answer

Hi Dado, Welcome to the Forum. I took a very, very quick look. My first reaction is that you do not sound like you are trying to be nice and friendly to people.

  • Hi Dado, Welcome to the Forum.
  • I took a very, very quick look.
  • My first reaction is that you do not sound like you are trying to be nice and friendly to people.
  • For example, This website will be online as long as I want.
  • It’s my decision how much money I will collect.
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Hi Dado,

Welcome to the Forum.

I took a very, very quick look. My first reaction is that you do not sound like you are trying to be nice and friendly to people. For example,

This website will be online as long as I want. It’s my decision how much money I will collect.

If I read that, I'd just think 'You are obviously very bossy,
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Thx Clive. But when it is my desicion. I dont know how to change that sentence, I will try. Thanks on your warning. And I should be politer.
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Hi again,

This website will be online as long as I want. It’s my decision how much money I will collect.

Why do you need to say this at all? Why not just remove the whole sentence?

Clive
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you are right but I still need that text to be checked
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Hi,,

but I still need that text to be checked
I'd be happy to spend time checking it if you first make it more polite and friendly, and less bossy. If you don't, then maybe someone else will check it for you.
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I'm sorry Clive. I didnt mean to be rude. And I think I'm not rude or bossy, maybe you see me like that... But you dont know me so you can't say things like that. Im sorry, but you cant judge me just because of this sentence This website will be online as long as I want. It’s my decision how much money I will collect. All you see in me is bad person not anything good.

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