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Average Joe Posted 7 years ago
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"Those are true to some extension. As far I'm concerned, serenity comes when you form new beliefs and habits; & thus, a new lifestyle." Also, is it correctly punctuated?
  

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Those are true to some extent . As far I'm concerned, serenity comes when you form new beliefs and habits; and thus, a new lifestyle.

  • Those are true to some extent .
  • As far I'm concerned, serenity comes when you form new beliefs and habits; and thus, a new lifestyle.
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Those are true to some extent. As far I'm concerned, serenity comes when you form new beliefs and habits; and thus, a new lifestyle.

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