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Todorovska Posted 18 years ago
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can You pleas cheek this text grammer/spelling/punctuation
Dear Ser,
I am writing in response to Your advertisement posed on the web page: www.najdirabota.com on September, 25 2008 in witch, You are looking for a candidate, for the position of Sales Representative.
As a job applicant, I can assure You that I, am the person that You are looking for the above stated position.
I am convinced that, the individual needed to fill the place, should be someone, with developed communicational and organizational skills, someone diligent, proactive, self-assured, presentable, flexible, as well as dynamic, creative, innovative, talented, ambitious and motivated.
I can assure You that am a kind of a person that has all of the above stated characteristics, and skills.
I am confident that You require that kind of person, and I assure You that my aspiration of joining Your Company, and becoming a part of Your Sales team, means that I am ready for the challenge, and ready for the opportunity to work with You.
Thank You for Your time and Your consideration.
I am writing in response to Your advertisement posed on the web page: www.najdirabota.com on September, 25 2008 in witch, You are looking for a candidate, for the position of Sales Representative.
As a job applicant, I can assure You that I, am the person that You are looking for the above stated position.
I am convinced that, the individual needed to fill the place, should be someone, with developed communicational and organizational skills, someone diligent, proactive, self-assured, presentable, flexible, as well as dynamic, creative, innovative, talented, ambitious and motivated.
I can assure You that am a kind of a person that has all of the above stated characteristics, and skills.
I am confident that You require that kind of person, and I assure You that my aspiration of joining Your Company, and becoming a part of Your Sales team, means that I am ready for the challenge, and ready for the opportunity to work with You.
Thank You for Your time and Your consideration.
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Hello todorovaska, and welcome to the English Forums. 1. " 2.
- Hello todorovaska, and welcome to the English Forums.
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- You also use commas incorretly - never use a comma between the subject and verb as you have here: I, am the person.
- Almost all the commas in your letter don't belong.
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Hello todorovaska, and welcome to the English Forums.
1. In English, we don't capitalize "you."
2. You also use commas incorretly - never use a comma between the subject and verb as you have here: I, am the person. Almost all the commas in your letter don't belong.
3. witch should be which
4. Beyond stating your qualities, it's common to state briefly your
1. In English, we don't capitalize "you."
2. You also use commas incorretly - never use a comma between the subject and verb as you have here: I, am the person. Almost all the commas in your letter don't belong.
3. witch should be which
4. Beyond stating your qualities, it's common to state briefly your
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