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Beastdw Posted 13 years ago
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Can you make this news report into passive or please correct any mistakes. thankyou

On May 31st 2012, at approximately 1:30 AM, Yeongdeungpo South Korea, A car accident happened. One of the famous members of bigbang, Daesung involved in that accident. When the police arrived on the scene, they found a taxi near-ended by Daesung’s Audi and a nearby motorcyclist lie on the ground, along with his motorcycle. The motorcyclist ‘Hyun’ revealed to be dead, and both Daesung and the taxi driver are alive. The police revealed they need more time to investigated whether or not the motorcyclist had already died before Daesung accident.
  

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  • Hello, beastdw—and welcome to English Forums.
  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please try to correct them and post your revised text here.
  • On May 31 st 20 12, at approximately 1:30 A M, Yeo ngdeungpo South Ko rea, A car accident happened.
  • One of the famous members of bigbang , Daes ung invo lved in that accident .
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Hello, beastdw—and welcome to English Forums.

I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised text here.

On May 31st 2012, at approximately 1:30 AM, Yeongdeungpo South Korea, A car accident happened. One of the famous members of bigbang, Daesung involved in that accident. When the
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