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Aastha Posted 22 years ago
Grammar
Can you make it professional?
One of my clents want to purchase my software. I want to say him
" You can download the demo from the site and can test. After that you can purchase it from the site only. so there is no need to go to the escrow system"
Can you make it bit professional?
" You can download the demo from the site and can test. After that you can purchase it from the site only. so there is no need to go to the escrow system"
Can you make it bit professional?
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How about this?? "You can/may download the/our demo from the/our website and test it. " Avoid repetitions such as "can" or "site" and be careful with punctuation and capital letters.
- How about this??
- "You can/may download the/our demo from the/our website and test it.
- " Avoid repetitions such as "can" or "site" and be careful with punctuation and capital letters.
- Hope these suggestions help you.
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How about this??
"You can/may download the/our demo from the/our website and test it. Then you can purchase it from our site, so it's not necessary to go to the escrow system"
Second sentence also: "It can only be purchased from our site..."
Avoid repetitions such as "can" or "site" and be careful with punctuation and capital letters.
Hope these suggestions
"You can/may download the/our demo from the/our website and test it. Then you can purchase it from our site, so it's not necessary to go to the escrow system"
Second sentence also: "It can only be purchased from our site..."
Avoid repetitions such as "can" or "site" and be careful with punctuation and capital letters.
Hope these suggestions
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