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Ruchi Chuhan Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Can you make it more catchy

1) Bore with desk job?? Want to do something full of energy
Come and join us to fulfil your wish...

2) Do you love sports?
then Sport360 will be Perfect place for you...
Run fast to capture the opportunity

3) Want to be surrounded by gears and sporty people?
Here we are... be the part of Our family
We are Hiring....

4) Day and night thinking about sports??
now stop thinking and start action with us

This are few lines first tell me are they grammatically correct and also make them more catchy
  

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not expecting you waste your time for thinking new lines, but if you have suggestions then they are most welcomed.

  • not expecting you waste your time for thinking new lines, but if you have suggestions then they are most welcomed.
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not expecting you waste your time for thinking new lines, but if you have suggestions then they are most welcomed.

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