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I think there are some mistakes in my sentences, but I did not find. Can you correct my text please ?
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The company car is increasingly becoming part of the benefits offered to executives.
This formula is more interesting than a salary increase.
To clarify, this represents a significant financial advantage. Indeed, the employee may use the vehicle as well as professional and private, whether weekend or holiday. This allows him to do so in the economy of a personal vehicle for him and his family.
In addition, the company achieved a social charges and tax for the employee enjoys a property that is assigned to financially painless way, without consideration of results.
And if senior managers and sales lose their benefits in favor of an increase, which does not compensate for the loss of the car, they might then want to leave the company. We will lose our best sellers and we will be bankrupt !