Can you help with letter of motivation for master program?

I wrote my letter of motivation to program "World heritage", what do you think of it? what should I add? Thanks for your attention!

Dear Sir \ Madam,


First of all let me introduce myself, I am *** and currently I am studying business administration and management in Russia, where in June I will defense my diploma project “The perspectives of relations development between Russia and Germany in business sphere” and receive the Bachelor degree in management.

I have always been interested in the differentiation of cultures all over the world and admired by art’s objects made by human, independently in what area or time period it was done. After writing the article for international marketing conference in my university about the modern problems of tourism industry, I became strongly interested in ECO tourism and protection of World Heritage while organizing touristic routes.

Applying to Your program gives an amazing opportunity to know a lot about World Heritage that further allows you to help keeping our heritage safe for the future generation.

I plan after completing this program to organize exhibitions and other special events to help people from different countries to see by themselves the majestic of our heritage. And maybe it will inspire someone to create our future heritage.

This program is an ideal opportunity for me to reveal myself, and start the career in very interesting sphere that will also be vital in future development of our civilization, as we should never forget about our past if we want to make a step forward. I am convinced, my background, skills and high motivation makes me the right person for this program.


Sincerely,

***