Can you help review my writing task 2. thanks very much
topic: Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement
Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There has been much debate about doctors are important than investors in society. I strongly believe that doctors and investors are both important in our life
First and foremost, investors bring many inventions for humans life. In the past, they produce electricity, television and it open a new technology for humans. More over, investors help people traveling around the world easier and faster by airplane, create computer and internet it's beneficial for people to develop all area in their life. For these reasons, most people would agree that inventors are important in society
On the other hand, Doctors also important because when people have ill they can find doctors who know problem of their health, doctors always take care of human health. They spend more than 10 years to study and training skill so they have more experiences and doctors also important for humans life
People can not live without doctor and people also live without inventors. Inventors produce modern machine to help doctors in their work and doctors take care investors when they sick.
In conclusion, inventors and doctors are important. So people need doctors for their health and they need inventors for developing quality of their life.
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There has been much debate about doctors are important than investors in society. ( A full clause cannot serve as the complement of a preposition, in this case, "about". " The second problem is that you need a comparative adjective with "than".
- There has been much debate about doctors are important than investors in society.
- ( A full clause cannot serve as the complement of a preposition, in this case, "about".
- " The second problem is that you need a comparative adjective with "than".
- The third problem is that you have used a word that is not relevant to the topic.
- There has been much debate about whether doctors are more important than investors (wrong word) in society.
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There has been much debate about doctors are important than investors in society. (
A full clause cannot serve as the complement of a preposition, in this case, "about".
You need a either non-finite clause or to use the conjunction "whether."
The second problem is that you need a comparative adjective with "than".
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