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Demart28 Posted 18 years ago
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Can you help me with this text aswell? Many Thanks

Currently I’m working for Sainsbury’s on the Code controller position from a few months.

Character of this work meet my requirements and I am really satisfied with the terms and conditions which company has offered me.

However as a result personal circumstances I’m moving to London coming month.

Precisely to North West London, where I would like to be transfer

I already checked, where are the nearest Sainsbury’s branches:

Finchley Road,

Wilesden Green,

Alperton

South Harrow

I very much hope, that you consider my request positively.

Your sincerely
  

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It would be a good idea to give some more particulars of the necessity for your moving. Dear Mr [surname], Currently I am working for Sainsbury’s in the position of code controller. The nature of this work matches my abilities, and I am very satisfied with the terms and conditions which the company has presented me.

  • It would be a good idea to give some more particulars of the necessity for your moving.
  • Dear Mr [surname], Currently I am working for Sainsbury’s in the position of code controller.
  • The nature of this work matches my abilities, and I am very satisfied with the terms and conditions which the company has presented me.
  • However , because of personal circumstances , it is necessary for me to move to northwest London next month, where I would like to be transferred .
  • I notice that the nearest Sainsbury’s branches are at Finchley Road, Wilesden Green, Alperton and South Harrow.
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It would be a good idea to give some more particulars of the necessity for your moving.

Dear Mr [surname],

Currently I am working for Sainsbury’s in the position of code controller. The nature of this work matches my abilities, and I am very satisfied with the terms and conditions which the company has presented me.

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