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Elmasry Posted 17 years ago
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Can you help me with this?

hello folks, this is my first post here Emotion: big smile
I have launched a new website and I created short description for it:

"Do you dream to be interviewed like celebrities? Are you bored of current social networking sites and want to be heard in a different way?. Get interviewed now through email ! Talk about your life experience, project, website or even your personal life !, Then the interview will be published on Querier.net and you will have fun sharing your interview with your friends !

Visitors will have the right to vote on each interview, Popular interviews are highlighted. "\

I wonder if you guys can help me improve this description, tell me if anything wrong with its English, grammar.. or need to be modified.


thanks in advance

  

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Do you dream to be interviewed like celebrities? Are you bored of current social networking sites and want to be heard in a different way?. Get Be interviewed now through email !

— Cbsteh

  • Do you dream to be interviewed like celebrities?
  • Are you bored of current social networking sites and want to be heard in a different way?.
  • Get Be interviewed now through email !
  • net and you will have fun sharing your interview with your friends !
  • Visitors will have the right to vote on each interview .
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Do you dream to be interviewed like celebrities? Are you bored of current social networking sites and want to be heard in a different way?. Get Be interviewed now through email ! Talk about your life experiences, projects, website or even your personal life !, Then the your interview will be published on Querier.net and you w
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thanks a lot Chris, but why did you remove "or even your personal life"? it's really important.. I want to tell visitors that they can be interviewed just for fun and talking about their personal lifes.. anyway to replace it with something better?

thanks again
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I did that because "life experiences" was similar to "personal life" but you could have meant "personal life" as personal details such as schooling. 
Chris
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Hi,
Do you dream of being interviewed like a celebrity? Are you bored by current social networking sites and want to be heard in a different way? Get interviewed now through email! Talk about your life experiences, your projects, your website or even your personal life! Then the interview will be published on Querier.net and you will have fun sharing it with your friends!

Visitors w
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yeah I meant personal details.. thanks again
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thanks Clive, I liked the replacment of "Do you dream of being interviewed like a celebrity?"
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ok guys, another request, please check the grammar of these instructions:

How the interview process goes

1- First you have to fill the forms in this page.


2- One of our interviewers will receive your submission and contact you as soon as possible through email, chatting with you about th
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Hi,

How the interview process goes

1- First you have to fill out the forms on this page.


2- One of our interviewers will receive your submission and contact you as soon as possible through email, chatting with you about the interview.


3- The interviewer will then have colle
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CliveHi,

How the interview process goes

1- First you have to fill out the forms on this page.

2- One of our interviewers will receive your submission and contact you as soon as possible through email, chatting with you about the interview.

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My last suggestion:
1. First You have to fill out the forms on this page.
or
1. First You have to fill in the forms on this page.
"fill in" or "fill out" is correct, though at the risk of me igniting more BrE vs. AmE usage war.
Chris
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