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Ravi Kanth Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Can you help me with the wording of the sentence?
I find the wording awkward. How can I make this better?
Manish helped me articulate the communication across all primary business verticals, be it, sales or marketing or hiring or pitches.
Manish helped me articulate the communication across all primary business verticals, be it, sales or marketing or hiring or pitches.
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Ravi Kanth I find the wording awkward. How can I make this better? Can you explain in simple terms what you are trying to say?
- Ravi Kanth I find the wording awkward.
- How can I make this better?
- Can you explain in simple terms what you are trying to say?
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Ravi KanthI find the wording awkward. How can I make this better?Can you explain in simple terms what you are trying to say?
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The context is already 'business'.
Manish helped me articulate our communications strategy across all primary verticals, be it sales, marketing, hiring or new business pitches.
Manish helped me articulate our communications strategy across all primary verticals, be it sales, marketing, hiring or new business pitches.
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I am wondering if "verticals" is the right word. Is there an alternative word for it?
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It is not the right word. Unfortunately, I have no idea what you mean by it.
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Manish helped me disseminate our business communications strategy across all the divisions and levels of our organization, including sales and marketing, and human resources.
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Maybe it just means
Manish helped me communicate with all our departments, including sales & marketing and human resources.
Manish helped me communicate with all our departments, including sales & marketing and human resources.
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Thank you everyone for your replies. I am trying to edit the writing of a friend of mine. You are right. When I do not understand what is written, I can't edit it.
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