Can you help me with my motivation letter?

Hi guys!!! Could you have a look at my motivation letter. I'm not a native speaker so I'm pretty sure that you'll find some mistakes. Thanks for any help!!!!

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Markiboy and I am studying Business Administration at the University of Applied Sciences in Mainz, Germany. Currently I am in my fourth semester, and am applying to study at London South Bank University for my fifth semester.

After successfully graduating from business school in Marburg I decided to take a part in a "Work & Travel in London" program in order to improve my language skills and to get acquainted with a new country and culture. I was living for almost one year in London. When I came back to Germany I realized it was one of the best decisions I have ever made in my life. Due to my participation in the Work & Travel program I have experienced how beneficial time abroad can be and how it contributes to my future. Not only did it improve my communication and language skills, but it also contributed to my personal growth through different circumstances and challenges I was facing during this time. I was lucky to have a chance to work together with English people and to take English courses at Edgware Academy, which helped me to see the British way of life and to acquire a deeper understanding of England and its culture.

With globalization and the ongoing internationalization of business, the importance of internationally experienced graduates is increasing. Therefore, semester abroad will be a big advantage for my future career. Particularly studying in a one of the most important financial centers in the world at the London South Bank University will help my dream of working in a big international company become a reality. The London South Bank University with international students from 120 different countries is the perfect place where I can meet people from all over the world. Studying with English and international students will help me to improve my intercultural skills, which are very important in order to work in an international business environment. Being fluent in three languages English, German and Russian, I rarely have difficulties to get in contact with people. Furthermore, I consider myself to be very open and communicative.

The great reputation of the University and a wide range of courses it offers are another reasons for studying abroad. Especially, disciplines such as International Marketing, International Business and English in International Business are of great interest to me. These courses and life abroad will give me a good opportunity to extend my knowledge and to take my language skills to the next level.

In my free time, I tend to my hobbies. Playing basketball as a member of the basketball team I realized that self-confidence as well as teamwork are crucial for being successful.

I always wanted to study in England and I am especially attracted to the London South Bank University. It would be both an honor and a joy to have the opportunity to study at London South Bank University. I look forward from hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,