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Razdoll Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Can you help me with my Motivantio Letter

Hello all. I want to apply for a studentship and this is my motivation letter. I would appreciate it if you could read it and give any comments of editing. Thank you!

Dear Sir/Madam,

When I learned about this position I didn’t think twice. The thought of a studentship at XY seemed like a unique opportunity to me, which would have a great impact on my life and my goals.

As I have nearly finished my studies, my next big step is applying for an MSc. However, in order to make an efficient choice of the degree, I firstly want to have working experience on this sector. In this way, I am going to spot which aspect of learning I like the most and want to deepen.

The field of studies that I have chosen opens up to a very competitive labor market. A working experience at XY would be a milestone at my future career and would give me great chances of a better job opportunity.

Human Recourse Management, Organizational Psychology and Marketing are heavily connected to the human factor, as the core of their operations. I believe that you get the most out of them, when you work in an environment where you cooperate with people of different cultures and ideas, who might have a completely different perspective of viewing things and handling situations. It can contribute to really expand my horizons and understand phenomena that I wouldn’t be able to do if working with people of the same culture. Furthermore, XY provides students with a friendly working environment and makes them feel a member of a big family, something that maximizes their creativity and productivity, which are important elements of sciences like H/R and Marketing.

Sincerely,
  

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Dear Sir/Madam, When I learned about this position I didn’t think twice. The thought of a studentship at XY seemed like a unique opportunity to me, which would have a great impact on my life and my goals. As I have nearly finished my studies, my next major goal is applying for an MSc.

  • Dear Sir/Madam, When I learned about this position I didn’t think twice.
  • The thought of a studentship at XY seemed like a unique opportunity to me, which would have a great impact on my life and my goals.
  • As I have nearly finished my studies, my next major goal is applying for an MSc.
  • However, in order to get the best out of the degree, I firstly want to get some work experience i n this sector.
  • That way, I can better identify which aspect of learning I like the most and wish to pursue further .
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Dear Sir/Madam,

When I learned about this position I didn’t think twice. The thought of a studentship at XY seemed like a unique opportunity to me, which would have a great impact on my life and my goals.

As I have nearly finished my studies, my next major goal is applying for an MSc. However, in order to get the best out of the degree, I firstly want to get some

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