Can you help me with my Ielts writing task 2, please? Thank you very much.

Some universities offer their courses on the internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

It Is true that nowadays having more and more online courses is becoming one of the best and most common options for education. Although many people believe that there are some drawbacks of internet-based learning, in my opinion I would go for having more benefits of leasing online.

The main drawback of the trend is related to the equipment that students or teachers use. If the equipment such as camera, internet or microphone are not good enough, the meeting will not take place in the bst stage. And this could lead to misunderstanding from students and the lack of connection from their teachers. For example, when a student has no or low quality of camera and microphone, it can be hard for him to ask jis teachers about what he does not know.

Despite the big problem above, I believe that there are tons of reasons why online university courses bring benefits to us. The first benefit is time-saving. The fast pace of ife time is something that is very needed in our life and because of that, many people are utilising time radically which means they can minimize travelling time and use it to do other things like relaxing or having a snack. Secondly, the cost to pay the tuition fee can be highly reduced, Because the students will not have to pay some extra fee related to the facilities such as computers and conditioners. Finally, online courses offer a wider chance to those who are willing to study despite the location, the age deviation. For example, in one course there can be students, workers or people from different cities.

In conclusion, it can be seen that the drawback of this trend can be a big problem, to the best of my knowledge I still believe that this new development brings the tons of advantages