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Can you help me with my Ielts writing task 1, please? Thank you very much.

The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

  • You should write at least 150 words.
  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

Answer

The bar chart compares the change of global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video throughout a 4-year period.

It can clear that there was an upward trend in all 3 groups at the end of the period.

In 2000, the revenue for games software was around 13 billion dollars, this number increase steadily to 15 billion and 18 billion in 2001 and 2002 respectively. And in 2003 the sale was nearly 20 billion dollars. The sale for DVE or video experienced a similar trend. It starts with nearly 20 billion dollars and rose to approximately 22 billion in 2001. From that the figure went up to more than 25 billion and reached its peak of about 30 billion dollars at the end of the period.

In contrast, the number for CDs witnessed a decrease throughout the years. In the beggining the revenue for CDs was the highest among 3 groupsat around 35 billion. But this figure soon dropped to aobut 33 billion and 31 billion in 2001 and 2002 respectively and ended with around 30 billion dollars at the end of the period.

  

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The bar chart compares the change of g lobal sales figures of games software, CDs and video DVD s or video throughout over a 4-year period starting in the year 2000 . [ 1] It can clear that there was an upward trend in all 3 groups at the end of the period. Overall, revenues from DVDs rose notably, and there was a modest increase in earnings from games software, whereas CD sales revenue experienced a slight decline even though it was always higher than the other two categories.

  • The bar chart compares the change of g lobal sales figures of games software, CDs and video DVD s or video throughout over a 4-year period starting in the year 2000 .
  • [ 1] It can clear that there was an upward trend in all 3 groups at the end of the period.
  • Overall, revenues from DVDs rose notably, and there was a modest increase in earnings from games software, whereas CD sales revenue experienced a slight decline even though it was always higher than the other two categories.
  • In 2000, the revenue for from games software was around 13 billion dollar s, [ 2] and this number increase d steadily to 15 billion and 18 billion in 2001 and 2002 respectivel y, And in and by 200 3, the sale it was nearly 20 billion dollars.
  • The sale for DVE or video DVD sales experienced a similar trend.
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The bar chart compares the change of global sales figures of games software, CDs and video DVDs or video throughout over a 4-year period

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