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Xhey2013x Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
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Edit the following sentences to correct all language faults, including grammar, punctuation, spelling, and word confusions. (You do not need to reword the sentences.)
1. Persuasion requires learning about you're audience, and analysing why they might resist your goal.
2. An especialy effective arguement includes 2 indespensable elements; a reasonable request, and a well presented line of reasoning.
3. If you're goal is to persuade a lending institution to give you fifty thoughsand dollars you would probably use rational appeal.
4. Our Presenitdent and Senior Sales Manager decided to send a sales letter to all current customers therefore they analyzed the product, purpose and audience.
5. There sales eletter focuses on the following 4 parts (1) gaming the audience attention (2) Convincing them that the purpose is worthy (3) Overcoming resistence and (4) Motivating action.
6. Experts agree that one of the biggest mistakes in persuasive request's are the failure to anticipate, and off set audience resistence.
7. because the Manager and him builded interest with easy to read facts and figures they're letter will undoubtably suceed.
8. A claim letter is a form of complaint consequently its wise to use the indirect strategy.
9. Anger and emotion is not effective in persuasion but many writers can no controll there temper.
10. Our latest press release which was written in our corporate communication department annouces the opening of 3 canadian office.=
My Correction=
1. Persuasion requires learning about your audience, and analyzing why they might resist your goal.
2. An especially effective argument includes two indispensable elements; a reasonable request, and a well presented line of reasoning.
3. If your goal is to persuade a lending institution to give you 50,000 dollars, you would probably use rational appeal.
4. Our president and senior sales manager decided to send a sales letter to all current customers; therefore they analyzed the product, purpose and audience.
5. There sales letters focus on the following 4 parts; gaming the audience attention, convincing them that the purpose is worthy, overcoming resistance, and motivating action.
6. Experts agree that one of the biggest mistakes in persuasive requests are the failure to anticipate, and off set audience resistance.
7. The Manager and him build interests with easy to read facts and figures, their letter will undoubtedly succeed.
8. A claim letter is a form of complaint; consequently, it's wise to use the indirect strategy.
9. Anger and emotion is not effective in persuasion, but many writers can't control their temper.
10. Our latest press release which was written in our corporate communication department, announces the opening of three Canadian offices.
1. Persuasion requires learning about you're audience, and analysing why they might resist your goal.
2. An especialy effective arguement includes 2 indespensable elements; a reasonable request, and a well presented line of reasoning.
3. If you're goal is to persuade a lending institution to give you fifty thoughsand dollars you would probably use rational appeal.
4. Our Presenitdent and Senior Sales Manager decided to send a sales letter to all current customers therefore they analyzed the product, purpose and audience.
5. There sales eletter focuses on the following 4 parts (1) gaming the audience attention (2) Convincing them that the purpose is worthy (3) Overcoming resistence and (4) Motivating action.
6. Experts agree that one of the biggest mistakes in persuasive request's are the failure to anticipate, and off set audience resistence.
7. because the Manager and him builded interest with easy to read facts and figures they're letter will undoubtably suceed.
8. A claim letter is a form of complaint consequently its wise to use the indirect strategy.
9. Anger and emotion is not effective in persuasion but many writers can no controll there temper.
10. Our latest press release which was written in our corporate communication department annouces the opening of 3 canadian office.=
My Correction=
1. Persuasion requires learning about your audience, and analyzing why they might resist your goal.
2. An especially effective argument includes two indispensable elements; a reasonable request, and a well presented line of reasoning.
3. If your goal is to persuade a lending institution to give you 50,000 dollars, you would probably use rational appeal.
4. Our president and senior sales manager decided to send a sales letter to all current customers; therefore they analyzed the product, purpose and audience.
5. There sales letters focus on the following 4 parts; gaming the audience attention, convincing them that the purpose is worthy, overcoming resistance, and motivating action.
6. Experts agree that one of the biggest mistakes in persuasive requests are the failure to anticipate, and off set audience resistance.
7. The Manager and him build interests with easy to read facts and figures, their letter will undoubtedly succeed.
8. A claim letter is a form of complaint; consequently, it's wise to use the indirect strategy.
9. Anger and emotion is not effective in persuasion, but many writers can't control their temper.
10. Our latest press release which was written in our corporate communication department, announces the opening of three Canadian offices.
Top answer
I have underlined the remaining problem areas: 1. Persuasion requires learning about your audie nce, an d analyzing why they might resist your goal. 2.
- I have underlined the remaining problem areas: 1.
- Persuasion requires learning about your audie nce, an d analyzing why they might resist your goal.
- 2.
- An especially effective argument includes two indispensable elements; a reasonable reque st, an d a well prese nted line of reasoning.
- 3.
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I have underlined the remaining problem areas:
1. Persuasion requires learning about your audience, and analyzing why they might resist your goal.
2. An especially effective argument includes two indispensable elements; a reasonable request, and a well presented line of reasoning.
3. If your goal is to persuade a lendin
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