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Topic: Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.

Essay:

From my perspective, the importance of using leisure time is not the same for everyone. It depends on many criteria, for instance, circumstance, conditions, as well as the personality of each person.

First, there is no standard to judge each point of view is right or fault. If you are a professor, who spends most of your day researching and discovering new things what would you do in your leisure time? You will go on doing word puzzles or listening to music, play the mind game or sit back and relax with a cup of tea?

Second, what's the result, is you think it's very important to use mind-training activities in your leisure time when you don't really enjoy it? I think you can read but you can't remember what you read, you can do word puzzles or any other mind game but they don't bring you joy and enjoyment. When in a day, you have used most of the time to listen to music, have a chat with friends, go for a walk or watch movies, entertainment during leisure time is no longer meaningful.

In any situation, the important thing is that people need to stay healthy by choosing what is best for them. Choose the right ways to make your life more meaningful and full of energy.