Can you help me to refine the following paragraphs?

Dear Professors,

Could you help to check if your computer has been granted the School of Management Folder access right under the path of H:\staff\Centennial College\School of Management\, which has all these 4 sub folders (All, Cross Team, Officer, Own Team) inside the School of Management Folder.

Please kindly reply this email to confirm if your School of Management Folder has been granted. Thank you.

Regards

Andy