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ESSAY... Can Technological development help us to improve our skills?

Today, the world is moving around this phenomenon and It has changed the way we live. Most people say that Technology makes our lives more comfortable and very convenient, however It works like a tool in some cases and contributes to our development.

In first place, I love to see sports, in special soccer and today we can see players that improve their speed or dribbling using electronic equipments while are training. In addition to this, currently I'm using a mp3 player to listen conversations or songs in English to get better at it.

On the other hand, a bad use of technology is seen when we find projects or homework already realized on Internet and we just "copy and paste", this is the worst lazy action.

In conclusion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. It's important to remember that Technology, itself isn't the problem.

Yuri