Can you help me to fix my essay?

Hi there, I just wrote an essay about my last vacation, but I don't know for sure if my writing is correct. I am so pleased if some of you can help me^^ Thank you in advance: ´

"Last year, I had a holiday with my company to Phu Quoc island. We spent 3 days there.

´On the first day, we went to Suoi Truc, the view there was beautiful with cool water, fresh air, and clear blue stream. After visiting, taking photos, we went to the hotel to check in. In the evening, we played a very interesting and fun team-building game. After dinner, we went to a coffee shop which name is Chuon Chuon. Here, we enjoyed the night view of this beautiful island and then returned to the hotel to rest to continue preparing for the second day.

´ On the second day, we took the ship to the island to watch coral and then had lunch on board with the rustic dishes on the island. In the afternoon we went to a resort, then we went to Sunset Santo resort and spent the whole afternoon there enjoying the view. There were lots of beautiful scenery, we took pictures, watched the sunset, and then returned to the resort to prepare for the gala dinner. At the gala dinner, we participated in fun games and sang together. Then we went back to the resort to rest and prepared for the third day and it was also the last day on the island. On the final/last day, we got up early to watch the sunrise and went to Hon Thom cable car. In the afternoon we returned to the resort to check out and went to the airport to return to Sai Gon. So it was the end of a fun holiday. I love there very much, the natural scenery is beautiful, the people are friendly and casual, I would recommend that place and I will visit Phú Quôc island again on the nearest day""