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TOPIC: Science finds that by studying the behaviour of three - year - old children they can predict if they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent is criminality related to human nature ? It is possible to stop children from being a criminal when the grow up .

In this day and age based on development of science realized that the behaviour of three-year-old children could be predict if they will become criminals in future . While many people said that criminality related to human nature I believe all children can grow up and become in a well people or exemplary citizens.

Nobody can prove that human nature is causes of criminality so no firm link between criminal behaviour and human nature . Children could be influented by lots of cause around their liffe . Throughout their childhood , children often observe their parents or relatives , most of their imitation are similar to those people . Parent's behaviour is important for the process mature of children . Beside that children also like study about behaviour from their friends or even teachers . Children always are taught to choice a good friends but they are not enough mature to find out.

To prevent children from becoming criminals we should do something to educate them for supplement aware about good thing . For instance, in UK after a month shools will invite an ex- prisoner , he will tell them some small stories and through it thay can teach children how to realize different from good thing and bad thing ,the children can learn how to avoid doing bad behaviour . For other schools , teachers who are manage a class provide good role models for children .

Relation established between human nature and criminal behaviour is not exist . Everyone are able to deter children from criminals by simple lessons in life.