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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hello.Friends.Can you help me to correct my essay and giving some grammatical or structuring advice?Thank you very much.

Different modes of transportation


Transportation,with its convenience,is not dangerous,nor is it expensive.There is different types of transportation in the modern world as ships,aeroplane,vehicle,train and bicycle.Yet,mankinds may not know the safing charts among these transport.The aeroplane is ranked in the first runner-up.Whatever the feature of transportation mode,aeroplane is already regarded as necessary.

To compare their velocity,nothing can overtake aeroplane.With its highest ability visiting different places,it can deliever us across ocean or mountains.There are lots of airport built around the globe.Some may become paralyzed due to the period of turmoil.However, they are very low possibility to occur.It is beyond disputes that an incomplete technique operating nowadays,with precision electronical caculating and experienced driver.

Some investigations indicated that the percentage of accidents with travelling times is immensely surpass other transportation modes in safety.With the aforementioned arguments,l believe visitors can take the lead in travelling by aeroplane.In the modern world,modern technology invented are always a festive invention to mankind.We may overlook the Sahara Desserts or Himalayas while travelling.Have a good fortune!

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Hello. L require some advices for correcting my essay. Thank you for your sharing .

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Hello. L require some advices for correcting my essay.
Thank you for your sharing.
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There're quite a few grammatical errors. I suggest keeping your sentences simple for a start.
(Also, I suggest leaving a space after your period. (I'm wondering if it's a formatting issue though.)

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