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Rabbit Wang Posted 18 years ago
Medical & Dental Studies

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I am a native Chinese speaker. This is a cover letter.
This is the first Chinese version of The QOLIE-AD-48 which was translated and culturally adapted for the assessment of health related quality of life in adolescents with epilepsy in . The validity, reliability and sensitivity were satisfactory and very similar to the results of original US English, Serbian, Spanish and Brazilian studies. Thus, it can be used in clinical practice, as well as in quality-of-life research on Chinese adolescents with epilepsy.
  

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Hello rabbit-- and welcome to English Forums. This is the first Chinese version of the QOLIE-AD-48 , which was translated and culturally adapted for the assessment of health-related quality of life in epileptic adolescents in China. The validity, reliability and sensitivity were satisfactory and very similar to the results of the original US, British , Serbian, Spanish and Brazilian studies.

  • Hello rabbit-- and welcome to English Forums.
  • This is the first Chinese version of the QOLIE-AD-48 , which was translated and culturally adapted for the assessment of health-related quality of life in epileptic adolescents in China.
  • The validity, reliability and sensitivity were satisfactory and very similar to the results of the original US, British , Serbian, Spanish and Brazilian studies.
  • Thus, it can be used in clinical practice as well as in quality-of-life research on Chinese adolescents with epilepsy.
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Hello rabbit-- and welcome to English Forums.

This is the first Chinese version of the QOLIE-AD-48, which was translated and culturally adapted for the assessment of health-related quality of life in epileptic adolescents in China. The validity, reliability and sensitivity were satisfactory and very similar to the results of the orig
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Dear Micawber,
Thank you for your help.
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Hello Mister Micawber. Sorry if I'm a couple of years too late, but I just wanted to point out a couple of things.

No person is epileptic. The siezures / fits caused by epilepsy are epileptic. The condition itself may be called epileptic; however the sufferer of the condition is not called epileptic, although this use is often erroneously applied to the word.

Also, for the sak

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