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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Can you help me revise my letter of motivation

0 Hi everybody,02br
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00 I want to apply to an intership which is funded by a German organisation and I would really appreciate it if someone could help me correct grammar and spelling mistakes. Of course, suggestions regarding weaknesses in the content are also welcome. Thanks in advance for your help.02br
00 Yours, Ophelia02br
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00Dear Mrs....,02br
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00With the intention of working in the international cooperation I have graduated in medicine at the XY University. On my search for junior positions in this area the XY-Program was brought to my attention. I was instantly intrigued by the program not only because of its preparation in the subject matter, but also because the internships at the XY would match my profile and would give me the opportunity to get an practical introduction to the work in this domain.02br
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00“XY” is of particular interest to me, since the project-oriented approach by the XY and interdisciplinary environment would enable me to combine my professional background with my human rights work as a volunteer for amnesty international. 02br
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00I have worked as a student assistant in the Institute of Medical Informatics, being responsible for a database and literature research. In the internship mentioned above as well as in the one about “XY” I l can leverage my knowledge acquired there.02br
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00During several stays in XY I have gotten to know the “YX”, a foundation with social and public health activities. They also have projects in the area of chronic disease prevention, so that I could gather experiences there when I participated in assignments with them in the countryside. I could also gain insight in the work of their ambulatory clinic 02br
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00In March I will attend the four weeks course “XY” in XY organized by the XY. This training will not only be about planning and management of humanitarian assistance, but also about law, ethics and human rights as well as health. I am especially looking forward to work on these topics in an interdisciplinary team with participants from all over the world.02br
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00I am fluent in English since I have spent time in the USA, professionally as well as privately, on several occasions. The last two years I have lived in the French speaking part of Switzerland, thus I am fluent in French as well. My Spanish is also very good, since I have completed several clerkships in YX.02br
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00Thank you for your time and consideration.02br
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00Yours sincerely,02br
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0 Hi, I just posted the message again in the letter writing section, because I guess this was not the right place to post.....02br
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