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Pen papaya 792 Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you help me preview my essay and give me some suggestions to improve my score, please? - Writing task 1

The chart illustrates the points of three teams which are scored in seasons 2002, 2003, 2004 and 2005.

Overall, the point of team B was the highest over four years, the opposite was true for the scores from teams A and C. While the score by team A was always lower than team B, in the last two years team A had the points higher than team C.

In 2002, team B had 82 points which was the highest score of the three teams, while the score of team C was 10 points and the point of team A was less than two times of team C. There was a slight increase in the scores of team A and C, respectively 11 and 15 points. By contrast, the year 2003 witnessed a marginal decrease of 22 in the point of team B.

In 2004, the point of team A was higher than the point’s team C, respectively 35 and 12 points. Meanwhile, the point of team B saw a slow fall to 43 before experiencing a steady growth of 12 in 2005. At the same time, the figures for teams A and C went down considerably below 10 points.

  

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Hi pen papaya, I see that your posts are approved automatically. It means you're experienced enough to use the forum properly. htm Moved.

  • Hi pen papaya, I see that your posts are approved automatically.
  • It means you're experienced enough to use the forum properly.
  • htm Moved.
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Hi pen papaya,

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