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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
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Can you help me polish these sentences? Thank you!

Learning French needs great input. My friend Michael who majored in French, had to wake at 6 o’clock every morning reading some vocabulary. When he was free, he was trying to communicate with French online. And he made lots of French friends. In the end, he made a great progress. He can communicate with French freely now. Therefore, if we are patient and persist in studying, we will make progress.
  

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Can you help me polish these sentences jiangyueming Learning French needs great input . My friend Michael who majored in French, had to wake at 6 o’clock every morning reading some vocabulary. When he was free, he was trying to communicate with French online.

  • Can you help me polish these sentences jiangyueming Learning French needs great input .
  • My friend Michael who majored in French, had to wake at 6 o’clock every morning reading some vocabulary.
  • When he was free, he was trying to communicate with French online.
  • And he made lots of French friends.
  • In the end, he made a great progress.
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Can you help me polish these sentences
jiangyueming Learning French needs great input. My friend Michael who majored in French, had to wake at 6 o’clock e
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Thank you. Maybe I supposed to use the word "correct" instead of "polish". Here is my revision.
Learning French requires a lot of efforts. My friend Michael who majored in French, had to wake at 6 o’clock every morning reading some vocabulary. When he was free, he was trying to communicate with French online. After two years, he made lots of French friends. In the end, he made a great progress
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jiangyuemingLearning French needs great input. My friend Michael who majored in French, had to wake at 6 o’clock every morning reading some vocabulary. When he was free, he was trying to communicate with French online. And he made lots of French friends. In the end, he made a great progress. He can communicate with French freely now. Therefore, if we are patient and persi
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It looks much better! Thank you!

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