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Soso7777 Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

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Hi everyone..

I need your help please..

A professor from near town university approved to meet with me and discuss if I can join hem in a scientific work. He asked me to write down some dates thru December and he will choose the suitable date for the meeting. I wrote a draft for the email and please I need your opinions and corrections. I really want to thank him for his consideration for my request so please help me..





Dear prof. ddd,



Thank you for your consideration of my request and I would like to inform you that the best dates as appointments during December for me are the weekends. The dates are :1-3, 15-17 or 22-24.Please pick up one that is appropriate so I can manage my flight to QQ city .

Thanks again and I am looking forward to meeting you.



Best regards,



Soso

  

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Dear Professor Smith: Thank you very much for accepting my request to meet with you. These dates would be fine: December 1 - 3, 15 - 17, or 22 -24. I very much look forward to hearing from you so that I can arrange my flight to Paris.

  • Dear Professor Smith: Thank you very much for accepting my request to meet with you.
  • These dates would be fine: December 1 - 3, 15 - 17, or 22 -24.
  • I very much look forward to hearing from you so that I can arrange my flight to Paris.
  • Thank you again for your kindness.
  • Sincerely yours,
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Dear Professor Smith: Thank you very much for accepting my request to meet with you. These dates would be fine: December 1 - 3, 15 - 17, or 22 -24. I very much look forward to hearing from you so that I can arrange my flight to Paris. Thank you again for your kindness. Sincerely yours,

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