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Phamlethanhcong Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you help me in checking my writing task 1?

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B, and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.


The bar chart illustrates the points scored by each team in one season. The survey starts from 2002 to 2005 season and it is surveyed in three teams: Team A, team B, and team C.


We can easily see that team B scored the highest in all four seasons, while the others 2 teams are always scored lower than 40 points. In 2002, team B scored 82 points, which means it is equal to about 5 times the total scores of the other 2 teams in this year. On the next season, surprisingly, the points scored by team B decreased deeply to 60 points, while team A and team C slightly increased to 11 points and 15 points, respectively.

However, continue to the 2004's season, team B continuously scored lower than the previous year with 43 points. But on the opposite, the points team A scored has increased dramatically to 35 points, but team C only scored 12 points. In the last year of the survey, team B has increased its points again to 55 points, team A decreased deeply to 8 points, and team C scored 5 points.

  

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