Can you help me fix a part of my essay below?
In order to deal with drivers exceeding the speed limit in urban areas, the government should install more cameras on main roads to deter people from over-speeding. Some authorities strongly believe that, with this method, more drivers who break the law will be arrested and this problem will be finally solved.
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" The word "over-speeding" is not good. Speeding is already an excess. It's redundant.
- " The word "over-speeding" is not good.
- Speeding is already an excess.
- It's redundant.
- In the final sentence, you should state the problem specifically because "this" is a little vague, though anyone would be able to figure out what you mean.
- The point is that people shouldn't have to figure out what you mean.
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Delete the comma after "that." The word "over-speeding" is not good. Speeding is already an excess. It's redundant. In the final sentence, you should state the problem specifically because "this" is a little vague, though anyone would be able to figure out what you mean. The point is that people shouldn't have to figure out what you mean. You need to state it clearly.
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