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LaurenC19 Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

Can you help me edit this sentance?

Why this was so important to me because I learned that you should not quit things you love because of others, you should either work at it or escape the problem. Never quit.
  

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You need to add a verb, but otherwise it is a question of punctuation. The punctuation can be handled several ways. For example: Why this was so important to me is because I learned that you should not quit things you love because of others.

  • You need to add a verb, but otherwise it is a question of punctuation.
  • The punctuation can be handled several ways.
  • For example: Why this was so important to me is because I learned that you should not quit things you love because of others.
  • You should either work at it or escape the problem: never quit.
  • OR Why this was so important to me is because I learned that you should not quit things you love because of others: you should either work at it or escape the problem.
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You need to add a verb, but otherwise it is a question of punctuation. The punctuation can be handled several ways.

For example:
Why this was so important to me is because I learned that you should not quit things you love because of others. You should either work at it or escape the problem: never quit.

OR
Why this was so important to me is because I lear
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