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It was a normal day of dance class and I remember really working hard and feeling very confident in myself. I glanced to the back of the room and my “friends” were calling my name out and screaming out harsh words about how I danced. It wasn’t the first time they have done it, but that day I realized they were not my friends at all. I was just so shocked I couldn’t even talk. I remember vividly calling my mom with tears running down my face asking her to pick me up right away. It was the worst day of my life at the time and I swore to myself I was NOT ever going to dance again.

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LaurenC19 It was a normal day of dance class, and I remember really working hard and feeling very confident in myself. I glanced to the back of the room, and my “friends” were calling my name out and screaming out harsh words about how I danced. It wasn’t the first time they have done it, but that day I realized they were not my friends at all. I was just so shocked I couldn’t even talk. I remember vividly calling my mom with tears running down my face, asking her to pick me up right away. It was the worst day of my life at the time, and I swore to myself I was NOT ever going to dance again.

If you have a second subject and verb in a sentence, you need to separate the two clauses with a comma. (This explains most of the commas here. The final comma, between 'face' and 'asking' is to separate the modifying clause from the noun before it.)

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